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The great artists in any medium- painters , poets, chorographers, sculptors- are those who create works of art that the majority of people can comprehend.

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 of
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 is the imitation of idea present in the mind of ar
tist (
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the artist
Socrates).
Art
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 is a
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 of expression that can be easily understood by everyone despite the complexities of the whole subject.
Art
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 is something which lightens the gruesome, dark and gloomy realities of
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. Everyone in the
world
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 likes
art
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 no matter what
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 of
art
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 it is. Paintings are present in almost every house either calligraphies or abstract paintings. Ev
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Everyone
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 listen
music
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 and read poetry regardless of
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 of the most significant and important br
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branches
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. Literature is the mirror image of a society and written and translated in
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into
anguages which are easily understood by the majority of people. Stories, poems and novels are written for the moral development of people. Who
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role, according
o the way their mindset is nurtured. God has
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 used literatures especially understandable stories for moral lessons of human being. There are several books like Old and New Testament, Quran and other divine books which are a type of
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 for common people. They easily understand them and build their
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fe a
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lives
round these.
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 is now commonly used as a means of entertainment all around the
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. Most of the businesses in the
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 are now based on
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 like dramas and moving pictures because 80% of the
world
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 population can understand
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art
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 and pay for these movies and dramas so it is
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 of the biggest means to earn money as well. Hollywood is the biggest in
dustry which p
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industry, which
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produces
ilms, the most popular
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 of
art
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. These movies run in the cinemas all around the
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. Rich and poor, good and bad all liked the movie Titanic all around the
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. Language might cause a pr
oblem but t
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problem, but
he story can easily comprehend by the performance on the screen. Routine
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 is now seems incomplete without some specific
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 of ar
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art
Songs which are usually based on poetry are now a very important factor of daily
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 because common people can understand them and interpret according to their feelings. Everyone used to listen songs in
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at
ifferent times for different purposes. Like drivers of Public transport used to drive with high pitch
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 and mostly it is difficult for them to drive without
music
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.
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 of
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 is quite understandable for them and their comprehension le
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lets
hem drive safely. All types of arts are understandable for co
mmon person.
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the common person
There may be some specific specimen of an
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 like abstract painting or Sufi
music
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 which is not easily understandable but most of the things are co
mprehendible.
capable of being comprehended or understood
comprehensible
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 is a
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 which gives aesthetic pleasure to everyone. Most of the people understand
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 according to their feelings and it is possible that a single song can give feelings of happiness to
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 person and feelings of sadness to another person.
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 depends the way it is interpreted.

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