International travel has many advantages to both travelers and the country visited. Do you think advantages outweigh disadvantages

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Some people regard that tourist from overseas has brought great benefits to many attractions. Others

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however

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believe that there exist some concerns about its

affect

a phenomenon that follows and is caused by some previous phenomenon

effect

local inhabitants

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the local inhabitants

and the

enviroment

the totality of surrounding conditions

environment

. In my view

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there are some advantages and disadvantages of international tourisms. On the one hand

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visitors from overseas bring us some profits

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Firstly

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they help increase other

countries’s

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countries’

income

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Clearly

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visitors from overseas travel and use services industries

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Therefore

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the

authourities

the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit

authorities

could use that money to develop their country’s infrastructure

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Moreover

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international tourisms would help strengthen cooperation relations between countries

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Obviously

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understand more about other countries’s religions and habits is the key to long term cooperation

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As a consequence

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the relationship between countries will be stronger

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On the other hand

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international tourists bring us a lot of drawbacks

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Firstly

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they leave a lot of garbage after visiting

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For instance

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many beaches have trash all over since the bad awareness of

travelers

the act of going from one place to another

travelling

such

as Nha Trang beach or Da Nang beach

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Secondly

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people who stay after travel is a reason for population increase and leads to many other

issue

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issues

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Apparently

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travelers

a person who changes location

travellers

who settled in other countries would

contributes

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contribute

to the worry of jobs and living places

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Topic Vocabulary:

Cultural exchange
Exposure
Broadens horizons
Increases understanding
Promotes economic growth
Tourism
Educational opportunities
Personal development
Self-confidence
Environmental impact
Carbon footprint
Disease transmission
Economic disparities
Cultural misunderstandings
Clashes
Security risks
Safety concerns
Balancing
Advantages
Disadvantages

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