It is often argued that it is difficult to get children to read. Why do you think this is? What measures could be taken to encourage children to read more? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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All the
time
, parents debate about children unwillingly reading.
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consider
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considers
some reasons for resistance
such
activity
such
as preference play and more active life; meanwhile, try to offer some solution for stimulation to read more including
audiobooks
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Audiobooks
and game.
Firstly
, few parents can deny that majority children are
enrgetic
possessing or exerting or displaying energy
energetic
that lead to tend
allways
at all times; all the time and on every occasion
always
move, thereby prefer outdoor games;
however
, reading suppose
sedentary style
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the sedentary style
of life that completely opposite to their preference.
Moreover
, reading means a lot of concentrate with
hard work
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the hard work
of the brain that lead to exhausted.
For example
, in my childhood we had
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homework, read
a
book
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of
six hundred pages it was really annoying and hard, and I always tried
evade
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to evade
such
activity
prefering
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preferring
walk or play on
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the street
.
Additionally
, all children as
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adults
an adult
are different so they have various
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preferences
in
activity
and type of a
book
, thereby sometimes they do not want
read
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to read
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offer parents, because of
such
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do not to lay in their area of the interest.
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to
children interest
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the child's interest
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children's interest
, parents can find out
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ways
a way
to encourage
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to, encourage
to read more, it means probably need give children freedom to choose types of a
book
whatever they want
instead
of impose own
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For instance
, I always love
particular type
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a particular type
of a
book
such
as
fantastic genre
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the fantasy genre
fantasy genre
at the same
time
cannot understand detective or romantic stories that frequently offer.
Likewise
, parents can create something like a game there they can ask children read them a
book
because
mother
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the mother
or father interesting it
,
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,
but not enough
time
for reading; meanwhile, parents can alternate reading aloud with children seem to share family
activity
.
Furthermore
, presently new technology
stimulation reading
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stimulation, reading
by
implement
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implementing
audiobooks
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Audiobooks
that have been increasing popularity with the years. To conclude, children have various
reason
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reasons
do not to read and role at the same
time
burden parents find out the key to encourage
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doing
it, because of one the best way, in reason
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all people, has never been
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found
.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • overwhelming presence
  • auditory stimulation
  • imagination
  • concentration
  • digital content
  • role models
  • captivate
  • e-books
  • interactive reading apps
  • positive reinforcement
  • gamify
  • communal engagement
  • personalized reading recommendations
  • foster
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