The pie charts below compare water usage in San Diego County and California and the rest of the world
The pictures illustrate the
water
used for residential, industry and Use synonyms
agriculture
in two main kinds of Cities including Use synonyms
San
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Diego
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County
and Use synonyms
California
and worldwide.
It is noticeable that more Use synonyms
water
is consumed by homes than by industry and Use synonyms
agriculture
in both cities. Use synonyms
By contrast
, Linking Words
agriculture
accounts for the vast majority of Use synonyms
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water
used in the rest of the world.
It can be seen from the graph that in Add an article
the water
San
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Diego
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County
and Use synonyms
California
State, residential Use synonyms
water
consumption Use synonyms
make
up three-fifths and nearly two-fifths respectively Correct subject-verb agreement
makes
while
a mere 8% of the Linking Words
water
used globally goes Use synonyms
to
home. The opposite pattern can be seen when we look at Remove the preposition
apply
water
consumption for Use synonyms
agriculture
. The largest proportion of Use synonyms
agriculture
is worldwide, at 69%, but only 17% and 28% of Use synonyms
water
usage in Use synonyms
San
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Diego
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County
and Use synonyms
California
in turn.
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Such
dramatic differences are not seen when we compare the figure for industrial Linking Words
water
use. The figure Use synonyms
simultaneously
at over a fifth in Add a missing verb
is simultaneously
San
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Diego
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County
and Worldwide. Use synonyms
In contrast
, the figure for Linking Words
California
is substantially higher at 33%.Use synonyms
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