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The birthrate in most developed countries is predicted to begin to fall over the next 50 years by 2030. It is estimated that over one third of the population in most developed countries will be aged 65 and more. What effects will these prediction have on developed countries if they prove true? What can be done now to deal with these situation?

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It has been assumed that in the near future, the rate of newborn child may experience drop and
also
 estimated that due to reduction in birthrate there will be more senior citizens than adults. The above mentioned situations can have many effects on growing countries,
however
, there are ways by which we can solve
this
 issue.
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ill discuss some possible effects of predicted future on growing nation and
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plain some remedial measures of it. If there will be more senior citizens than youngsters in the future, than many companies suffer from issue of lack manpower as most of civilians are at retirement age.
This
 prediction can put extra burden on grownups as they have to pay more taxes. It will
also
 affect the economic structure of developing nation as production of goods may experience fall due to less manpower. More and more funding needed in the health care sector as one
third
 of the population is of age 65 or more. Fortunately, there are ways by which we can solve some of
this
 eff
ects. The go
Suggestion
these effects
this effect
vernment should increase the retirement age of senior citizen from 65 to 70.
Also
, the ministry should encourage young people to spend a good amount of time with family as lack of family time is one of the major factors behind low birthrate.
Also
, new immigrants should be welcome in order to strengthen population. To conclude, the essay discussed not only the effects of the above mentioned situation, but
also
 productive remedies as well. In my opinion, by encouraging youth and imposing new law issue of birthrate can be solved.

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