The charts below show ưhat UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008

The charts below show ưhat UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008
The bar charts give information about
graduates
and postgraduates in Britain who did not
work
full-time in terms of what they did after finishing university in the year 2008. A brief analysis of the charts reveals that most UK
graduates
were most likely to continue their
study
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after leaving college. Meanwhile, part-time
work
and
further
study
were the two most common choices for postgraduate
students
who did not have
full-time
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job
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. Regarding
graduates
in the UK,
further
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study
had by far the highest number of
students
, which was 29665.
By contrast
, the figure for
graduates
who chose to be volunteers was the lowest, at only 3500
students
.
While
nearly 18000
graduates
applied for part-time
work
, the statistic for
students
who were unemployed tended to be slightly lower at over 16000, ranking
third
on the chart. In the same year,
further
study
was
also
the most popular option for British postgraduates with around 2700
students
choosing to continue their
study
paths,
whereas
the number of those who worked part-time was in
second
place with 2535
students
. In comparison with approximately 1600 postgraduates who had to face unemployment, only 345 decided to do voluntary
work
.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "further".
Vocabulary: Replace the words graduates, work, study, students with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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