Using a computer every day can have more negative than positive effects on people. D o you agree or disagree?

Nowadays young children

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computers so frequently that even

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them more than 12 hours every day.

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although

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Although

some people believe that

phenomenon

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the phenomenon

has no harmful effects on young children while some thinkers

dont

do not

don't

support.

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with, Technology offers us a plethora of merits.The most important one among them is easy

availablity

the quality of being at hand when needed

availability

of

anykind

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any kind

of

questions

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questions, however

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another

points

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point

is worth considering computers provide children's multifarious methods to help them efficiently and improve their knowledge.

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in

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In

addition, children's who spend quality

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om

internet

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are exposed to

huge amount

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a huge amount

huge amounts

of information that can improve their grade and complete

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moreover

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without

help

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the help

of teachers they are motivated to

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the

internet

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to gain information

,

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,

as the result they retain more that if they were

thought

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thinking

. On

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the flip side

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,

the

negetive

characterized by or displaying negation or denial or opposition or resistance; having no positive features

negative

negatives

aspects of computers cannot be overlooked the major causative factor of

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circumstance to health issues likes

obesity which

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obesity, which

can develop when pupils spent too much

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and became

addictive

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addicted

to the computer and decrease the outdoor activities.The most damaging aspects of spending too much

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online, is the

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of pornography materials that can devalue

value

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the value

of

parents

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parents, thus

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website are everywhere in their online even

thier

of them or themselves

their

children is on an educational site they can pop up and trying to close the site won't work.Due to the

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can be considered as unsafe children. To conclude, parents need to have rules as to which site their children visit and

amount

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the amount

of

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they spend online on the

othehand

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using

internet

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daily basis have both pros and cons.