Many parents complain that computer games have no value to their chuldren’s Study. On the contrary , those online games have produced a lot of negative effect on their mental and physical development. What is your opinion

It’s no news that computer games are one of the trending activities practice today. The purpose of the game is for recreation

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but recent reports have shown how addicting

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activities are. Researches made reported that the psychological dependency on

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games are creating a

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on the mental and physical development of children.

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makes children psychologically dependent on it

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He/she would develop an addiction to playing

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and creating lesser time for academics and physical activities,

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addiction will cause a stray from their academic performance in school and a daunting social interaction with people

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To illustrate, a certain parent reported their 9 years old son to the government authority because he could not be contained any more

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investigations were made that the boy was

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and addicted to video games

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was diagnosed with a mental illness and was referred to a therapy.

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Most computer games indulge in violent actions and character

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knowing how quickly children Mimics their

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negative trait developed could make children expose to vulgarity and if intended might lead to a mental illness

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True-Die, a popular video game that causes hysteria in parents because the motive of the final lap was a suicidal mission

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imagine what damage

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might have caused in the psychological and physical development in children. In conclusion

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video games have increasingly affected the development of children

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that parents should encourage physical activities

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