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Climate change is an issue. Do you agree with this?

#climate #change
Yes, in school, teachers should focus on analysing and thinking, not making students memorise something so I believe that teachers should spare
time
 for asking their
students
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students'
student
 opinions about lessons. If schools ask children for their opinions, they can see ways for how to improve teaching, and they can realise what they are lacking of. I think if you ask students for their opinions often, after a certain
time
, they may start misleading you because they are children at the end, and they may not be honest with you every
time
 you ask. I don't read any magazine no longer. Actually, I don't even remember when was the
last
time
 I have bought a paper based magazine. For newspapers, I just follow some online newspapers,
such
 as BBC, Guardian. I like reading articles related to politics,
environment
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the environment
, science because I am interested in these areas. I occasionally read online newspaper in a foreign
language
. I follow
BBC
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the BBC
 and Guardian, and both are in a foreign
language
. Yes, you can make your foreign
language
 level better by reading
articles
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the articles
 in
this
language
, but you can
further
 it only in passive skills. To improve it in active skills, you need to do something more. I want to talk about a restaurant which is close to my apartment. It is called Avşa Restaurant. I like there because I feel like at home when I am there. The owners are very welcoming, and I don't feel any pressure when I am here. I can spend
time
here even
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here, even
 after when I finish my dish. There is one particular reason why I like
this
 restaurant; it has vegetarian home foods
in
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on
 its menu, and they are delicious. It is rare to come across
to
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in
 a restaurant which offers a range of vegetarian foods in its menu

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    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
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    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
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    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
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