Some people believe that the Earth is being harmed (damaged) by human activity. Others feel that human activity makes the Earth a better place to live.

There are many people say that
earth
has been impacted negatively by pe
ople t
Suggestion
the people
hemselves. And others claim, it was improved by human who live on it. So here, i
w
refers to the speaker or writer
I
ill ex
lain i
make plain and comprehensible
explain
n details about the two perspectives.
First
of all, there are en
ormous number o
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an enormous number
f people have misused re
cources o
available source of wealth; a new or reserve supply that can be drawn upon when needed
resources
f
earth
.
In addition
, they pa
rcticd p
a customary way of operation or behavior
practiced
assive actions on lands. For ex
amlpe,
an item of information that is typical of a class or group
example
human ar
e used t
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is used
o go through deforestation. As they cut trees for mu
tilple p
having or involving or consisting of more than one part or entity or individual
multiple
urposes.
However
, there is group of go green community has presented reports as an evidence that air pollution was brought by human's actions. Whereas, people invented cars work on fossil fuel.
Moreover
, cars would produce carbon dioxide which it comes out from exhausts.
Although
people have problems with air br
eathness,
the process of taking in and expelling air during breathing
breaths
they still use co
nsistantly.
in a systematic or consistent manner
consistently
There are so many im
matures w
someone who pursues a study or sport as a pastime
amateurs
martyrs
matters
ere dead due to
this
effect. As their bodies are weak, they are un
bale t
(usually followed by 'to') not having the necessary means or skill or know-how
unable
o resist diseases, which it is caused by cars' emission.
On the contrary
, there are hu
ge number o
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a huge number
huge numbers
f people working on improving ecosystem on
earth
.
For example
, go green community people, they create sy
stem t
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a system
o conserve nature from being polluted. As they persist to keep people aware of passive actions, which it to destroy life on
earth
. In ad
dtition,
a component that is added to something to improve it
addition
they have created programs to increase awareness while using
ea
rth's resources.
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the earth's resources
Besides
, they try to educate people about using renewable resources as an alternative features. So they can play im
portant role t
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an important role
o encourage human on using it. As they can enlighten them about going th
roug r
from beginning to end
through
enewable resources
instead
of fossil fuel to function cars. As a re
sults t
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result
he percentage of immature's death will be decreased dramatically. Ailments might be va
nsihed s
having passed out of existence
vanished
lowly.
Furthermore
, deforestation will be slightly taken off. Animals will be protected
also
from extinction, as we know an
imal c
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the animal
animals
an be ex
tincted d
no longer in existence; lost or especially having died out leaving no living representatives
extinct
ue to deforestation which animal depend on. To conclude, people can use renewable resources to save life from being destroyed by human in
activities t
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in activities
owards
earth
. So non renewable re
cources a
available source of wealth; a new or reserve supply that can be drawn upon when needed
resources
re not the only re
scorces t
available source of wealth; a new or reserve supply that can be drawn upon when needed
resources
hat human can depend on
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • sustainability
  • renewable resources
  • carbon footprint
  • conservation
  • ecology
  • emissions
  • fossil fuels
  • greenhouse gases
  • habitat destruction
  • industrialization
  • pollutants
  • recycling
  • urbanization
  • deforestation
  • ecosystem
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