Some people believe that the Earth is being harmed (damaged) by human activity. Others feel that human activity makes the Earth a better place to live.
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ople t
hemselves. And others claim, it was improved by human who live on it. So here, i Suggestion
the people
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an enormous number
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f available source of wealth; a new or reserve supply that can be drawn upon when needed
resources
earth
. Use synonyms
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assive actions on lands. For exa customary way of operation or behavior
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multiple
However
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breaths
nsistantly.
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o resist diseases, which it is caused by cars' emission.
(usually followed by 'to') not having the necessary means or skill or know-how
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f people working on improving ecosystem on Suggestion
a huge number
huge numbers
earth
. Use synonyms
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o conserve nature from being polluted. As they persist to keep people aware of passive actions, which it to destroy life on Suggestion
a system
earth
. In adUse synonyms
dtition,
they have created programs to increase awareness while using a component that is added to something to improve it
addition
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rth's resources.
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the earth's resources
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, they try to educate people about using renewable resources as an alternative features. So they can play imLinking Words
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o encourage human on using it. As they can enlighten them about going thSuggestion
an important role
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enewable resources from beginning to end
through
instead
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sults t
he percentage of immature's death will be decreased dramatically. Ailments might be vaSuggestion
result
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lowly. having passed out of existence
vanished
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also
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imal c
an be exSuggestion
the animal
animals
tincted d
ue to deforestation which animal depend on.
To conclude, people can use renewable resources to save life from being destroyed by human inno longer in existence; lost or especially having died out leaving no living representatives
extinct
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owards Suggestion
in activities
earth
. So non renewable reUse synonyms
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re not the only reavailable source of wealth; a new or reserve supply that can be drawn upon when needed
resources
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hat human can depend onavailable source of wealth; a new or reserve supply that can be drawn upon when needed
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