The pie charts below compare water usage in San Diego, California and the rest of the world.
The given pie charts compare the percentage of
water
consumed for residential, industrial and agricultural purposes in Use synonyms
San
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Diego
, Use synonyms
California
and the Use synonyms
world
as a whole.
It is noticeable that residential usage accounts for the vast majority of Use synonyms
water
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consumption
in the two American regions. Use synonyms
By contrast
, the rest of the Linking Words
world
consumes more Use synonyms
water
in agriculture than in industry or domestic.
In Use synonyms
San
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Diego
County and Use synonyms
California
state, 60% and 39% of total Use synonyms
water
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consumption
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is
utilized in domestic, Change the verb form
are
while
only a mere Linking Words
of
8% of Change preposition
apply
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water
used globally goes to homes. The opposite trend can be seen when we look at agricultural usage. Add an article
the water
This
accounts for a massive 69% of Linking Words
water
use in the rest of the Use synonyms
world
, but only 17% and 28% of the total Use synonyms
water
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consumption
in Use synonyms
San
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Diego
and Use synonyms
California
respectively.
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Such
dramatic differences are not seen when we compare the figures for industrial Linking Words
water
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consumption
. The same proportion of Use synonyms
water
(23%) is used by Use synonyms
San
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Diego
and the Use synonyms
world
as a whole, Use synonyms
while
the figure for Linking Words
California
is slightly higher, at 33%.Use synonyms
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