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Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of the society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both view and give your opinion.

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Some people believed that school is
the good
Suggestion
the best
the better
 environment where students can learn to be good parts of the society, while the opponents of
this
 idea think that parenting is more necessary for
developing
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development
 of children. I would argue parents should consider
this
 as their responsibility
instead
 of relying on the school to do
this
 job. On the one hand, schools have many experiences and professional skills for educating students.
Firstly
, transmission of knowledge is
high
Suggestion
highly
 effective at school with teachers.
In other words
, if students meet their friends and their teachers, they will form different
behaviors
manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviours
 with many people.
Secondly
, schools set the strict standard for process of study.
Therefore
, students must have continuous assessment to make the grade as requirements of schools.
On the other hand
, it seems to me that parenting is the most important key so that children become helpful people in the society. Mothers and fathers are always close to their offspring, so their children obey them. Young children are usually easy to teach because parents spend lots of time for them.
Additionally
, youngsters are easily affected by their parents.
As a result
, they will imitate attitudes and habits of
parents which
Accept comma addition
parents, which
 can create character of children. In conclusion, while schools
brings
Suggestion
bring
 much knowledge for students, it seems to me that the contribution of parents for parenting their offspring is
more effect
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more effective
 on children’s
behavior
manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviour
 in the society.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • good members of society
  • teach
  • parents
  • schools
  • responsibility
  • values
  • respect
  • empathy
  • responsibility
  • formal education
  • citizenship
  • ethics
  • social responsibility
  • lead by example
  • role models
  • conducive environment
  • extracurricular activities
  • community involvement
  • collaborate
  • holistic approach
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