The table below shows the percentage of the population by age groups in one town who rode bicycles in 2011
The table gives a comparison of population proportion in one town who rode bicycles in 2011 between 5
age
groups
.
Its clearly seen that the most cycling group of both genders are kids between age
0-9. Genders have small difference: females
are 51.3% and males
are 50.3%. Next
age
group between 10-17 olds shows the significant change in proportion: 42.2% and 26.6% respectively.
Next
3 groups
shows that less than half of adults are cycling in the town. Observing groups
, females
are still have higher proportion of cycling than males
. But there is a percentage rise in elder people group, comparing to 18-39 and 40-59 year old people: 18.5% for females
and 13.2% for males
.
The figures for the 18-39 and 40-59 year olds are much lower for both genders relatively to other age
groups
. But its also
can be seen that women are cycling almost like one and a half times rather than man.
Overall
, females
of all 5 groups
have higher percentage of cycling rather than males
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