Some people think that it is better for a country’s economy for people to spend money while others believe that it would be better for people to save money. What is your opinion about this?

Few people claim that investing

money

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would be a better option for enhancing the

country

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's economic development

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, others think that spending would be the obvious choice

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In my

opinion both

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opinion, both

of the choices have their own

consequenses

a phenomenon that follows and is caused by some previous phenomenon

consequences

and benefits.

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Moreover it

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Moreover, it

is always better to spend the

money

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Genereally

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Generally

, a

country

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's economy is influenced by numerous factors

such

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as industries, agricultures, employment sectors, and other sources too.

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to that as a citizen of the

nation we

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nation, we

must contribute to a certain extent by paying taxes and bills correctly without due.

which

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Which

directly aids economic development of the

country

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example consider

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example, consider

a situation where you hold up all your

money

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in the bank that leads to a situation of abundance of

money

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to be

flowed

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flowing

in the sectors

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Indeed, it leads to situation of collapse of

money

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flow

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in the society

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Instead

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of stacking up the

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money it's

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money, it's

better to make it

flow

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through various sectors

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However in

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However, in

the mean time bank can lend your

money

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through loans and

icentives

a positive motivational influence

incentives

for people, that enables the cash

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flow but

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flow, but

it is not effective as spending

money

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through various sectors

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As far as spending

money

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is

concerned we

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concerned, we

have our own privilege

in

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of

choosing sectors for spending

money

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that

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That

creates a big transition in the

flow

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of

economy

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the economy

and

enhaces

increase

enhances

the nation's overall profit. And leads a path for foreign investments which could benefit our nation in its's own way. Eventually, the

country

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's economic well being is determined by various factors and elements

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,

in addition

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to that it is always better to make the

money

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to

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flow

flow

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in various sectors to aid the

country

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's economic development as a responsible individual

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