Some of the methods used in advertising are unethical and unacceptable in today’s society. To what extent do you agree with this view.

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In today’s competitive world, companies are adopted so may strategies for their better profit and that’s why they adopted many advertising in different ways. Apart from that traditionally use now companies use Television

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Radio and most of the common way is internet for advertising.I tend to agree that some method of advertising adopted by companies is unethical and unacceptable. In the beginning

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we can say that some methods of advertising are influencing the people to buy unnecessary things.The main effect of advertising is on children.Children attract about various things which they see in advertising and they force their parents to buy for themselves.

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companies hire some celebrity for advertising.Because of that, indigenous people attract towards that thing.Some of advertising influence bad habits of society while they waste their money on a bad

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, some advertisings are two unethical like smoking and alcohol advertising.That type of advertising banned in some countries.

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type of advertising puts a bad effect on society while people tend to buy these things without think their own health.

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consuming that unethical

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may cause to physical problem.

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apart from that unacceptable thing there are so many things which are ethical.Some

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advertising is necessary for people to know what they are buying.Advertising

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describe the quality of things.In my perspective, we have to understand what we are consuming.Because some

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is detrimental to ourselves.So in my opinion

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we can only know that things because of advertising.Having said that, advertising

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also create

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employment. To sum up

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some unethical and unacceptable advertising creates a negative effect on people and kids.In my way,

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type of advertising should be banned by the Government.

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Topic Vocabulary:

Unethical
Unacceptable
Deceptive
Exaggerated
Misleading
Manipulation
Vulnerable
Targeted advertising
Perpetuation
Societal norms
Stereotypes
Negative body image
Intrusion of privacy
Data-driven
Over-saturation
Desensitization
Annoyance
Greenwashing
Eco-conscious

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