some people think that there should be no change in life while others think that change in life is good.Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some members of the society like to do the same things throughout their

life

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lives

, while others go with the difference.

However

, according to me should be full of excitement and different tastes. To start with, a man who is doing the same sort of thing has some merits

such

as, by doing work in the same field with same manner, he will have a good hand in that profession.

consequently he

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Consequently, he

Consequently he

will be a specialist in that field.

For example

the city called ‘Malegaon’ is famous for its handloom production, just because industries are working in the same traditional manner with no change,

hence

they are known specialist in Manufacturing of handlooms

thus

their product have a great demand.

Furthermore

a human who is not thinking much will be in a state of peace, as he

has does not have

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didn't have

did not have

was not having

wasn't having

to research or work hard for bringing change. On the flip side

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many think that the things in activity should not be done in the same way.

Although

variation in lifestyle or method of working has some risks involved, but if change is brought in a proper way it will be very beneficial for the society.

For instance

, earlier the designing of machine parts was done by hand drafting, but some thought about modifying the old method and they end up in inventing a software called ‘AutoCAD’ with which a machine component can dream and designed with very short period of time.

Additionally

always searching for some alternate will enhance the thinking ability of a person and it will make his product more efficient. To conclude, both thoughts have merits and demerits, but in my opinion the life of a human being should have some downs and ups,

then

only he can become a successful person.Today world is running with

such

an advanced technology just because of people who wanted some revolution.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
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4Grammar mistakes
 

4 paragraphs

304 words

7.00

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Introduction & conclusion present

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Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

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Accurate spelling & word formation

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Clear and correct grammar

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Clear & comprehensive ideas

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