Every country has poor people and every country has different ways of dealing with poor. What are some reasons for poverty? What can we do to help poor ?

There is no
deny
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denying
in the facts that
poverty
has become
serious problem
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a serious problem
around the world and so far none of the effort is seemed to work by
government
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the government
.
This
problem is caused by numerous factors
such
as health and medical facilities. All the facts related to it will be presented in
upcoming paragraphs
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the upcoming paragraphs
.
To begin
with, numerous factors are behind
poverty
. Primarily, most nations with
huge population
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a huge population
huge populations
of
underprivilege
lacking the rights and advantages of other members of society
underprivileged
do not have
healthy rate
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a healthy rate
of literacy because number of schools are insufficient as per needed or it is too expensive for many to afford.
As a result
,
majority
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the majority
of people do not get primary schooling to qualify for any decent job.
Moreover
, it is
also
seen that in order to run the economy, many nations levy heavy tax on many useful items
such
as fuel, diary products, clothing and grocery which lead to rise in inflation and cut the saving by putting more stress on
household budget
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household budgets
the household budget
.
However
, government can take some initial steps to get
few people
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a few people
out of
poverty
.
First
of all,
regime
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the regime
should focus on giving skill education to poor people to train them for different types of jobs like
mechanical
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mechanics
,
Accept space
,
plumbers
,
Accept space
,
It sectors and many more and
this
will make them qualified and skilled to do
job
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the job
a job
and earn livelihood for
family
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the family
.
Finally
, expensive medicines and medical facilities should be subsidised to make it affordable. To conclude
,
Accept space
,
although
poverty
rate is increasing day by day due to literacy among people
,
Accept space
,
but higher authority can help poor by giving education and some other facilities to them.
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