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In some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a a year between finishing high school and starting university studies.dicuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people you decided to do this

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Now a day, adults of some nation prefer to travel or work for a while between completing their high school and commencing graduate studies.
However
, in my opinion, it will not be a good option to take a gap in studies after they finish their schooling.The greatest benefit of working or travelling is that they will be able to gain practical knowledge of the market and experience from a firm where they will be doing a job,
consequently
this
 will help them in getting a good job easily after they will finish their university studies,
for example
 -after graduate studies interviewer generally asks questions based on practical knowledge and experience, so already the person with some experience will be ahead of many other students.
Moreover
, travelling will allow
then
objective case of they
them
 a chance to refresh and explore the world,
for example
, so I that they will be of energy when university studies will begin.
On the other hand
, taking a year gap can create some problems too,
Moreover here
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Moreover, here
 is a possibility that young students may get attracted towards wrong activities
such
 as consuming drugs and drinking alcohol during their free time.
Furthermore he
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Furthermore, he
/she will be wasting one precious period of life.Along with these problems there is a chance that a university may change the rules of admission or may be the cutoff score of upcoming duration will be higher, in which he/she will not be eligible for admission. To conclude,
although
 taking a gap after high school has some positives, but in my opinion risks are more that young students may indulge in criminal activities which will ruin their life,
hence
 students should continue their education without any break.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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