More and more people in developing countries are purchasing cars for first time. What problems does this cause and What do you think are the possible solutions?

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Cars are being bought by the people belonging to the emerging economies because of the availability of technologies and easy ways of financing like loans and instalments.
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However, it
is the major reason for increasing air
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pollution but
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pollution, but
the solutions are not out of reach, by increasing the price of products and
fuel
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can decrease the number of buyers. Spreading air
pollution
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vehicles is the major concern of the nation because it is the cause of some severe diseases like lung problems, asthma and many more ailments. Some in toxic substances are released by the vehicles which result in
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depleting
the ozone layer and affect the human body. It is
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a reason for global warming.
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, a survey report by the local newspaper shows that 75% of the
pollution
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has increased by more and more vehicles running on the roads and 20%
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of
manufacturing units.
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, increasing the number of vehicles create problems not only for the nation but
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for individuals. Undoubtedly, problems can eradicate by raising the cost of cars and the
fuel
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used by them. As per the law of demand if the
rate
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of the product will raise
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it will affect adversely on
demand which
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demand, which
means the desire of purchasing cars will go downward.
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, high
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of
fuel
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will
also
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play an essential role to control the
pollution
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, because
fuel
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is a compulsory substance for any
vehicle
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, if the
rate
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will up
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people will think twice before purchasing a
vehicle
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because without
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moving any
vehicle
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is impossible.
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, when Japan’s government was planning to increase the
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of
fuel
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residents stop their vehicles on the road, because they know it will create a burden on
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individual
individual's
pocket.
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, in
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way authorities can help to reduce the level of
pollution
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. Conclusively, cars are liked by the people, because they can be easily affordable by them. But people are unaware of the issues from an excess quantity of
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vehicle
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vehicles
. By taking some preventive measure these problems can be sorted.
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A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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