You have a full-time job and you are also doing a part-time evening course. You now find that you cannot continue the course. Write a letter to your teachers

Dear

Mrs.

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Yılmaz; I am writing

this

letter to inform you about the situation which feels me so sad. As you know I am working for Havaş as a ground service. Summer is about to come which means

also

busy days are about to come. But I was informed 3 days before to train new employees. Because our trainer was

broken

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leg.

This

is a really unexpected thing. That means I will work after I shift an extra 2 hours.

Besides

this

is a huge chance to prove myself. As you know I am addicted to

this

course and wanted to be consistent, but it seems that it is not possible. I think I don't have a chance to drop out of the course or if it is possible can you change my class on the weekends'? I think there is a point about

this

situation in the contract. Thank you for now. I look forward to hearing from you. Sincerely. Yağmur

Fri Apr 03 2020

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3Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
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6 paragraphs

162 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

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