Television is dangerous because it destroys the family tie and community spirit. It is said by some that television absorbs so much of people’s time that they have no time to talk to each other. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give your opinion.

Nowadays, a huge number of people

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are watching

television

during their spare

time

. In some

houses TVs

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houses, TVs

have became

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have become

the

devises

an inclination or desire; used in the plural in the phrase 'left to your own devices'

devices

that attract everyone’s attention and are rarely switched off.

Although

it is incorrect to dispute the advantages of

television

, I myself do agree with people who say that it has more disadvantages.

First

of all, people really spend much less

time

for communication. Some families rest, eat, sleep with working TV’s and it has become a norm for a lot of people. I have witnessed the similar situation when I have visited my relatives. After a difficult working day they didn’t speak to each other,

moreover

, they wordless

stared

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stare

into the screen during their dinner.

This

is really a dangerous situation as these people live in the same building and can be considered as family,

however they

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however, they

don’t know each other anymore, and even worst, they don’t spend

time

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with

their kids.

Secondly

,

television

has become an instrument which has a tremendous influence on a huge mass of people. Governments, politicians, trade marks successfully use the opportunity to attract our attention, to give us some information, which often is very controversial, advertise different products, etc. In

conclusion I

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conclusion, I

would like to

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emphasize

that we need to reduce the

time

we spend on watching

television

.

Instead

of that, it’s much

beneficial

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more beneficial

to become closer to our kids and other family members, to find some new hobbies, read books, catch up with friends and watch films online via internet.