You had a good meal at a local restaurant with your family. Write a letter to the newspaper to give the feedback: • Where the restaurant located • What you had for the meal • Why do you recommend this restaurant to others

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Dear sir, I believe you are in charge of

Tehran

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the Tehran

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Today newspaper, so I am writing

this

letter to inform you about my viewpoints regarding Jamshid

restaurant

. The

restaurant

is located in the suburbs of Tehran; its accurate location is

Kordan

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the Kordan

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region where various beautiful and picturesque gardens can be found abundantly.

Moreover

, I went there in

company

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the company

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of my family members. If you need to know what the food

ordered

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was ordered

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by me, I should tell you I ate

this

restaurant

famous Kebab, while my friends served other delicious cuisines, like Iranian QormeSabzi and Abgosht.

This

restaurant

is highly recommended to all citizens, especially those who are looking for a quiet and calm environment to eat their meals.

Although

its distance is rather far from the city, the high quality of foods cooked there as well as its relaxed atmosphere compensate that long journey.

In addition

this

, all staff working in

this

restaurant

are

highly-qualified

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highly qualified

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and professional, and they have the reputation of being hospitable and friendly towards customers because as I have experienced there, they were welcoming and treated us kindly whenever we intended to order something. All in all,

this

restaurant

is really worth visiting and eating meals. Thank you for your kind attention, and I hope my experiences and feedbacks work for other citizens. Kind Regards, Hamid Gholami

Submitted by hamiddehkordi on Fri Apr 03 2020

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

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8 paragraphs

222 words

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