The diagram below shows the average hours of unpaid work per week done by people in different categories. (Unpaid work refers to such activities as childcare in the home, housework and gardening.) Describe the information presented below, comparing results for men and women in the categories shown. Suggest reasons for what you see.

The bar graph presents information on the amount of weekly unpaid working

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experienced

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married people by gender and by the

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, the

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of weekly unpaid

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increased significantly in married

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when the

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of

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they have increased,

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that in married men slightly decreased when the

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of

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they have increased. Based on the information provided in the bar chart, married

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of unpaid

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compared to that

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. The

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of unpaid

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raised drastically by 20 to slightly over 50 when

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with 1-2

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grew approximately by 10 to 60 when they have at least three

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had the highest

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of unpaid

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when they have more than three

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which doubled to 60 compared to those without

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to the increasing

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of unpaid

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females

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, that in married men decreased negligibly and remained slightly under 20

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per week. The difference between the

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of unpaid

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between the two genders increased significantly when the

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of

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increase.

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peak when they have more than three

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. In summary, married

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spent more effort on housework than married men.