Historical monuments and museums are visited only by the tourists, locals do not visit them. Why is this is happening? What are the solutions to prevent this?

I think it is because locals has been there for once or more. Once when they find out they have been there enough time and no more new stuff to see, eventually they will get bored and probably they will go out somewhere else
next
time. I guess
that is
what is happening and prevent those, my idea is held regular event and advertise them on
news paper
a daily or weekly publication on folded sheets; contains news and articles and advertisements
newspaper
to make
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the museum
museum
museums
more interesting. If there are more events, it will be not same things
everytime
in
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the museum
museum
museums
and there will be more people from
advertisement
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the advertisement
of
event
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the event
.

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