In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this case? What can be done about this problem?

With the current economic situation,
although
many countries have achieved agricultural achievements, their lives are still difficult. Even suffering from hunger. Research shows that one of the causes is population growth and unemployment. Let's clarify the cause and learn measures to understand why many people around the world still go hungry in spite of the advances made in farming
To begin
, the
first
reason is population growth. It takes place in many countries and is gradually out of control. Many households still work hard to earn money.
However they
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However, they
are helpless, the house is too crowded. Therefor, they are exhausted and really depressed. Another in fact, at every meal in
house
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the house
, everyone almost has to give it for children and older people.
Another
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people only eat moderately that due to these people will not be able to guarantee health.
On the other hand
, the
next
reason is unemployment. It takes place in young people who are not willing to study and lazy. Except for those who are not qualified to study. Today, life 4.0.
Firstly
,
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,
companies need talent to contribute and help the company go up so those who do not meet recruitment requirements will be disqualified. They have no job, no money to live and no need to go hungry.
Secondly
, all companies need young people to devote long- term dedication. Of course companies do not want to pay too much budget for the elderly when they retire. To sum up, hunger is  
extremely
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Extremely
scary. Of course the only way to improve is to invest in education itself. Communicate for everyone to know the appropriate reproductive program. Hope everyone in the world will have a happy life.

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