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Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rathe than secondary school. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

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 the other countries for purchasing food, drinks and tobacco. The amounts are about 30 percent of the consumer budget. Spain completes top three countries and surpasses Italy and Sweden respectively. The figures for clothing and footwear are totally distinctive, so Italians dominate as purchasers of garments. They spend 9% of their income on clothing while the numbers fluctuate around 6% for the other countries. Swedish people are in
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Cognitive development
  • Primary school
  • Foreign language acquisition
  • Phonetic flexibility
  • Cultural immersion
  • Global citizenship
  • Enhanced academic performance
  • Early exposure
  • Pronunciation
  • Language pedagogy
  • Bilingual education
  • Resource allocation
  • Curriculum planning
  • Mother tongue
  • Native language competence
  • Language proficiency
  • Workload management
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