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people are living longer. some people that it causes big problems. others, however, think the ageing population has many advantages for business, government and for society in general. discuss both the views and give your opinion.

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In the present generation many people think longer
life
 will
leads
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lead
 to major issues. Whereas, some others felt that
old
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older
 people can generate more
money
 by using their experience. By
this
 essay I will discuss on age longevity with both advantages and disadvantages with my opinion. On one side many people like to live a
longer
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long
life
in addition
 to stay with family, pursuit more happiness and
also
 to make
money
. As the
life
 goes longer their knowledge will be doubled and it will helpful to share their views and ideas to
younger generation
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the younger generation
a younger generation
 and they are able to contribute to some of the sectors like teaching, management, political parties and research centres with their extensive experience.
Moreover
, in modern
times many
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times, many
 people are busy with the work
life
, where their grandparents will be helpful in taking care of children and giving great relief to the parents. On the other side some people
thinks
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think
 that ageing will bring health issues and psychological disorders which leads to huge
money
 spending on medicines and hospitals, ultimately lead to mental tensions and sorrow to family members.
Also because
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Also, because
 of more aged
people
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peoples'
 government have to allocate more
money
 for pensions and it will be burden on each individual for paying more taxes to government. So, as to believers of
this
 aspect are right in somehow. In my opinion, people living older is good for society as per the development criteria by means of their long-
life
 experiences,
furthermore
 to the communities and families having grandparents would give their guidance to the younger generation even though they are suffering with health issues.
Lastly
, we have to respect and take care of
the old
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older
 people for their service and path to the world.

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