Some people think that the best way to improve road safety is by reducing the maximum speed limits on vehicles, others think there are other better ways. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

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In some countries, more and more people are shopping in large stores outside of town, so many stores in the small town
center
an area that is approximately central within some larger region
centre
have gone bankrupt.
Moreover
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, people who don't have a car have trouble shopping at the outside store, and it can increase when using a car. While
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has many different benefits, I think the limitations are beyond its benefits. On the one hand, shopping in large stores outside the city can have many advantages.
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,
this
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helps businesses outside the city earn more profits, can promote the development of many aspects of the remaining fields
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as economy and tourism. . .
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leaves people less motivated to migrate to cities, which makes it easier to address the population burden on cities.
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, the out-of-town priority helps the auto industry grow, because people without cars have to buy one to go to these suburban shops.
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leads to the promotion of economic growth there.
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, I believe there are major limitations to
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change. The
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is air pollution, because using many
cars
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car
emits a large amount of exhaust fumes into the air.
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causes people to have many respiratory diseases.
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, heavy traffic congestion on the streets on the outskirts of the city is a serious problem.
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can contribute to people wasting time and being late for work when they are stuck on the road for a long time, making them angry and annoyed. In short, there are some advantages of increasing shopping in out-of-town stores, but I still believe its disadvantages are more significant.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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