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Millions of people every year move to English speaking countries such as Australia Britain and America in order to study at school college or university

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It is widely acknowledged that the gigantic amount of rubbish is produced every day. Huge wastage is a concerning problem in both the developed and developing countries.
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 essay will discuss reasons for increase in waste production and
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 suggest some possible measure to alleviate the garbage.
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, the packaging is the major cause for enormous production of rubbish. Whether it is necessary or not, large companies will attract the customers with designing packaging to any product. The material used for packaging is not non-biodegradable and will get accumulated in bulk over a period of time.
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, humans are pleasure seekers, they have adopted used and through policy. People are acquiring new products
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 of repairing the older or obsolete items, which
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 doubling up the same. Some of the companies warranty
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 will be for a shorter period of time, after that people are no longer interested in repairing the commodity,
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 production of rubbish increasing tremendously. Another key point is that, increasing technology is one of the major factors for immense garbage. People are updated to new products every day, cell phones are the best example sophisticated technology. Every new model is creating tons of waste Turning to the possible solution, the government should start implementing strict laws for manufacturing biodegradable products for packaging and designing. The warranty should be for a longer period so that the consumers can repair and reuse it.
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 up gradation of technology should be adopted at regular intervals. To conclude, though the government authorities have passed many orders, it is not easy to eradicate wastage. It’s the people who should stop over consumerism and start recycling and bio degradable products
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    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
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