Computers are being used more and more in education. Some people say that this is a positive trend, while others argue that it is leading to negative consequences. Discuss both sides of this argument and then give your own opinion.

The usage of desktops and laptops in the
study
is increasing day by day. It is often argued by some that, the more usage of these electronic devices has a lot of advantages while others disagree and say they have many detrimental effects. In my opinion, more usage of computers is a positive trend.
This
essay will cover both areas: advantage is
this
development, which consist of not only saving
time
but
also
various tools, knowledge; and its disadvantages which include health issues and very limited physical
interaction
.
To begin
with negative consequences, along with
study
, many students start playing various games on the computer and
this
brings many detrimental effects on their health
such
as pain in the eyes, which is an ill effect of using computers.
Secondly
, students who
study
online have very limited
interaction
with their teachers and classmates. Needless to say, how important physical
interaction
with teachers are for students for their studies. To illustrate with an example, a recent survey shows that the majority of students agree that they have very limited
interaction
with their teachers after start using computers and which harm their studies in many ways. On the flip side, many others, including me, argue that computers are good for education.
To begin
with, it saves lots of
time
. There are many problems or assignments which can be solved using PC which saves lots of
time
to them compared to go somewhere and ask for help from someone.
Secondly
, students can learn many tools available within
PC
Suggestion
the PC
like word, excel or PowerPoint. These softwares help them in the future to grow and to create documents. To illustrate with an example, according to a survey from The Hindustan Times, the majority of students agrees that using computers helps them to
study
and learn new techniques and tools which would help them in their career. To conclude, Some argue that using system can affect health and it decreases communication between between people,
although
others, have an opinion that it saves
time
and give opportunity to learn various tools. In my opinion, learning is an essential thing in life which gives career growth so I agree that using desktop and laptop is a positive trend.
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