Some people think that the teenage years are the happiest time of most people lives. Other think that adults life brings more happiest, in spite of great responsibility. Discuss both these views and give your opinionp

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We all know that
life
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is not a bed of roses. For
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, everyone has to struggle in its ups and downs for achieving something. Owing to
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, many people forget that how to be happy in
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duration.
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, they thought about their teenage period where they used to be celebrate and enjoy at most of the times.
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, some people argue that adult
life
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brings more happiness in spite of greater burden of their families. On the one hand, it is true that juvenile times were awful with no worries and responsibilities. They have always been in the cheerful mood in every moment.
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many teenagers have the burden of study, but
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could not bother them, they
always been
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have always been
happy rather to took any stress.
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,
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is the era in which young boys and girls
lives
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live
each and every minute with
joyfull
full of or producing joy
joyful
mood whether
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mood, whether
they are in school or in college with their friends or at home with their family.
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, at
certain stage
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certain stages
a certain stage
of
life
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they have to be
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thinking
about their future.
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, it is
also
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true that
adults
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adult
lifespan years
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are
happiest
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happier
times, but not the same as they were young. There are two types of adults in the society.
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, which put them into depression and anxiety due to fear about their future and family.
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Consequently they
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Consequently, they
adopt some unethical modes to earn money and drag themselves into some
bad
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worse
evils in the society like crime, drug addiction etc.
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, those who maintain fine balance in all aspects of their
life
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they will become happiest of all times.
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, During
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age adults
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age, adults
have many tasks to
do whether
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do, whether
it is about their professional career, family planning or any. What is more
joyfull
full of or producing joy
joyful
is that if they achieve successfully upon their tasks they are the most ecstatic person in the world.
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,
this
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is not an easy achievement for all. To conclude, I opine
adolescents
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adolescent
times is more fortunate than
adults
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adult's
adult
lifetime.
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,
i
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I
think that if adults maintain fine balance in their
life
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with great courage and conviction they could
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live with pleasure and happiness.
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