Some people think that in order to prevent illness and disease, governments should make efforts in reducing environmental pollution and housing problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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days,

while

urgent health-related

problems

,

according to

some,

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attributed to the pollution of our planet’s atmosphere and the issues of housing, I agree up to

this

point that

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governments have to take

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full responsibility to mitigate

this

overwhelming obstacle. It is

initially

true that

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unprecedented number of

people

are suffering from environmental catastrophe and housing scarcity. In

this

way, in order to save the valuable

life

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lives

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of innocent

people

who lack homes and are facing

such

serious illnesses as cancer, radiation, skin lesions and others, the governments are obliged to

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the factors leading to the emergence of

this

problem – the toxic gases emitted from the transport system (mainly cars) and high costs of accommodation which are not affordable for the impoverished class of the population. The initial step would be the forced decline in the number of cars by which

people

are commuting, and

following

this

, the provision of free accommodation for homeless

people

is a plausible alternative to avert the vast trend of illnesses.

Thus

, the governments have a key role in altering the process the aforementioned

problems

emerge. Another point to consider, persuading

people

to realize the environmental and housing

problems

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not ethereal.

First,

each government ought to supply its citizens with an adequate source of knowledge so that they would not only get rid of their peccadilloes like wasting,

throwing

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rubbish – all of these factors leading to

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environmental issues, but

also

assist other impoverished members of society, and

this

paves the way for the heyday in every country.

Therefore

, the question is not just about avoiding

problems

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but is the realization of the whole Earth’s population to diminish their adverse impact on their surroundings. In conclusion, the more

people

recognize the threat of polluting sources and accommodation

problems

, the more thriving our planet will be.