Some people say that physical exercise should be a required part of school day. Other believe that students should spend the whole day on academic studies. Which opinion do you agree with? Use specific reason and details to support your answer.

Personal training is

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part of education. There are many people who think, that

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should focus on academic studies during

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school hours and in

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essay I will support my view with examples. On the one hand, those who believe physical

exercise

is avoided in school might argue that it can ruin their academic

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.

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is because

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disputes can create pressure on the students.

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, it is quite common for young people

to begin

smoking to get rid

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of

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problem, but the resulting confrontations with tutors can lead to difficulties with communication afterwards.

In contrast

, if there is no physical

exercise

in their

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curriculum

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, there will be a much greater sense of

hapiness

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happiness

among people.

On the other hand

, my view is that

this

physical

exercise

is important in school because it can help teenagers to get out

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hectic

schedule

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. The reason for

this

is that by having sports they can develop their skills.

For instance

, a child may grow up in a family of

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but feel very strongly about

exercise

. If

this

child does not voice their opinion, they will be going against their

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principles

.

However

, if they are willing to engage in physical

exercise

with their academic studies, their conscience will be much clearer despite the agony of the argument. In conclusion, despite the danger of damaging

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talent, it is my firm belief that

along with

education extra activities are significant for becoming mature and

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adults.