Fossil fuels (coal, oil, natural gas) are the main sources in many countries, but in some countries, the use of alternative sources of energy (wind energy and solar energy) are encouraged. To what extent do you think it is a positive or negative development?

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Until

few decades

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a few decades

ago fossil fuels were only the sources of

energy

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across the

globe but

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globe, but

at present there are other alternatives exist to produce

the clean

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cleaner

energy

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without damaging the environment. We have been witnessing that these days the production and usage of renewal

energy

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is growing drastically in many nations. I agree that

this

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is a very positive thing when it comes to

environmental safety point

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the environmental safety point

of view and

also

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to overcome

energy

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scarcity The main advantage of using alternate sources is that the conventional sources like coal and

oil

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are non-renewable. They take thousands of years to form and we are consuming more day by day with growing

demand

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. What if

oil

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reserves

goes

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down? Any

supply

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supply, demand

demand

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mismatch would lead to an

energy

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crisis situation.

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Gulf

Oil

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Corporation recently revealed that, the

oil

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reserves in the Middle East are drastically

decreasing which

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decreasing, which

is an alarming sign and it could lead to

oil

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crisis soon or later. So it is advisable to go for alternative sources

such

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as wind, solar power facilities to produce unlimited

energy

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. It is evident that burning coal,

oil

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, natural gas

generate

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generates

enormous

pollution which

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pollution, which

is causing harm to the environment.

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, today we

are seeing

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see

climate changes across the globe due the temperatures rising every

year significantly

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year, significantly

because of the carbon dioxide and other air pollutants produced by burning fossil fuels. As population

growing

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grows

across the countries, the

demand

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for the

energy

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also

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increasing. So these days Governments in many countries are preferring to generate renewable

energy

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to meet the power

demand

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by setting up wind, solar

plants

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plant's

plant

infrastructure etc.

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, the government of Andhra Pradesh able to produce surplus

energy

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after setting up more than 10000 wind turbines across the state and it is one and only state in India to supply

un interrupted

having undisturbed continuity

uninterrupted

and unlimited power to the people of the state. To put it in a nutshell, the use of alternative sources is a very positive development and all the Governments across the globe should invest and research on renewable

energy

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projects.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

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Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

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Fossil fuels (coal, oil, natural gas) are the main sources in many countries, but in some countries, the use of alternative sources of energy (wind energy and solar energy) are encouraged. To what extent do you think it is a positive or negative development?

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Multinational companies are becoming increasingly common in developing countries. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

In many countries today, people in cities either live alone or in small family units, rather than in large, extended family groups. Is this a positive or negative trend?

You Are due to give a talk to you through about the danger of smoking, but you cannot now do so. Write a letter to the youth group leader, explain that you cannot come. Apologise for your absence. Suggest a new occasion.

You recently read an article in the newspaper about someone whom you know personally but have not heard from in a long time. You found that some of the information published was incorrect.