The graph below represents the total expert of clothing from 3 different countries over a time period. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparision where relevant
Both maps present how an
island
was developed for tourism over time.
The island
is around 250 meters long and is surrounded entirely by the ocean. The development of the island
was huge with many facilities added over time.
Many facilities were constructed on the island
. Accommodation is now numerous, with 6 buildings erected to the west of the island
, and a further
9 rooms added to the east. In the middles
of the Fix the agreement mistake
middle
lodgings
a restaurant and reception area were Add a comma
,lodgings
also
built, with footpaths and vehicle tracks added to connect the buildings.
A pier was built to the south of the island
, where boats can arrive. The trees remained unchanged on the island
, with facilities erected around them. The only development to the beach on the west is a swimming area which was added.Submitted by usama.ayash on
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