Motorways help people travel quickly and cover long distances but they also cause problems. What are the problems of motorways and what solutions are there?

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One of the most preferred forms of transport
are
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is
motor
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vehicles because they are fast and allow people to travel longer distances in less time. Motorways
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are a swift way to commute,
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, the excessive reliance on them has led to a lot of problems
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as
pollution
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, acid rain, global warming and
traffic
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jams. In
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essay I will discuss the problems that motorways cause and suggest possible solutions for them.
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, I will consider the environmental problems associated with motorways.
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, I will discuss the problem of
traffic
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due to increased car ownership.
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, the engines of
motor
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vehicles are powered
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vehicles, power
vehicles power
by combustion of the fossil fuels
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as petroleum. The incomplete burning of these fuels causes production of oxides, dioxides and
trioxides
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of sulphur, nitrogen, and carbon which get mingled with the atmosphere. A part of these gases
mixes
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mix
with the atmospheric vapour causing acid rain while the remaining erodes the ozone layer causing ozone layer depletion and global warming. The
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solution that needs to be implemented to solve the problem of
pollution
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and
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other environmental damages through overuse of motorways is replacing the fossil fuels with a renewable and more environmentally friendly fuel. Solar-powered and battery powered vehicles are gaining a lot of popularity because all they need is charging from
sun
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the sun
or chemicals that are easily available.
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to
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, these vehicles do not give out any form of pollutant gases when being driven.
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, with the need to travel
quickly almost
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quickly, almost
everyone owns a
motor
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vehicle. With people commuting in all directions during office hours, roads are flooded with cars and public transport causing
traffic
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jams.
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leads to delays and defeats the ultimate purpose of using a
motor
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vehicle which is to travel quickly. The
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solution that will not only help in reducing
traffic
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jams but
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in fighting
pollution
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is popularizing the car-pool culture. People should use their vehicles to give lift to other people travelling in the same direction as them, thereby reducing the number of vehicles on
road
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the road
. People should
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opt for public transport. In conclusion, for people to be able to fight the problems caused due to use of
motor
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vehicles it is important that they find alternatives that are as quick to commute and
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help in decreasing the
pollution
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levels and
traffic
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jams.
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A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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