The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

IELTS Writing Task Chart for The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The maps illustrate the access way to enter the City Hospital located inside the ring

road

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. There have been significant differences between the 2007 and 2010

situation

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. The

bus

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stops change into the

bus

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station, and the roundabout is added. So, there is no more direct

road

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to the hospital. In 2007, there were six

bus

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stops (three

bus

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stop

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each side of the

road

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)

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Hospital

Road

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. On the east side of the

road

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, there was a parking area for staff and

visitor

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visitors

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. But, in 2010 the

bus

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stop is changed into

the

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bus

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station.

In addition

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, two roundabouts

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also

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are also

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constructed

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the north and south of

the

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apply

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Hospital

Road

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Besides

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apply

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these changes, there is

also

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a new car park.

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Initially

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the parking lot for staff and

visitor

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visitors

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was in the same area.

However

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, in 2010 the parking area has been separated. A new car park especially for the public is built on the east side of the City Hospital.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".

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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 71%.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words road, bus with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 3 times.

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5
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
2
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
11
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

163 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

traffic flow
road access
ring road
bus stops
bus station
congestion
parking facilities
pedestrian crossings
vehicular flow
organizational structure
accessibility
enhancements
configuration
dedicated
diverting traffic

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