The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The maps illustrate the access way to enter the City Hospital located inside the ring
road
. There have been significant differences between the 2007 and 2010 situation
. The Fix the agreement mistake
situations
bus
stops change into the bus
station, and the roundabout is added. So, there is no more direct road
to the hospital.
In 2007, there were six bus
stops (three bus
stop in
each side of the Change preposition
on
road
) in
Hospital Change preposition
on
Road
. On the east side of the road
, there was a parking area for staff and visitor
. But, in 2010 the Fix the agreement mistake
visitors
bus
stop is changed into the
Correct article usage
a
bus
station. In addition
, two roundabouts also
constructed Add a missing verb
are also
in
the north and south of Change preposition
on
the
Hospital Correct article usage
apply
Road
.
Besides
of
these changes, there is Change preposition
apply
also
a new car park. Initially
the parking lot for staff and Add a comma
,Initially
visitor
was in the same area. Fix the agreement mistake
visitors
However
, in 2010 the parking area has been separated. A new car park especially for the public is built on the east side of the City Hospital.Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 71%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words road, bus with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 3 times.
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