The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and 2010.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The maps illustrate the access way to enter the City Hospital located inside the ring
road
. There have been significant differences between the 2007 and 2010
situation
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. The
bus
stops change into the
bus
station, and the roundabout is added. So, there is no more direct
road
to the hospital. In 2007, there were six
bus
stops (three
bus
stop
in
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on
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each side of the
road
)
in
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Hospital
Road
. On the east side of the
road
, there was a parking area for staff and
visitor
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. But, in 2010 the
bus
stop is changed into
the
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bus
station.
In addition
, two roundabouts
also
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constructed
in
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on
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the north and south of
the
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apply
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Hospital
Road
.
Besides
of
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these changes, there is
also
a new car park.
Initially
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the parking lot for staff and
visitor
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visitors
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was in the same area.
However
, in 2010 the parking area has been separated. A new car park especially for the public is built on the east side of the City Hospital.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 71%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words road, bus with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 3 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • traffic flow
  • road access
  • ring road
  • bus stops
  • bus station
  • congestion
  • parking facilities
  • pedestrian crossings
  • vehicular flow
  • organizational structure
  • accessibility
  • enhancements
  • configuration
  • dedicated
  • diverting traffic
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