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The young today spend a large amount of their leisure time in shopping centres. It is feared that this could have a negative influence on the young and society. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this view?

#amount #leisure #time #centres #influence #society
TODAY
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S, YOUNG PEOPLE PREFER TO PASS THIER FREE
TIME
 IN DIFFERENT WAYS.SOME PEOPLE BELIEVE THAT
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MOSTLY YOUNGTERS LIKE TO GO SHOPPING IN THEIR FREE
TIME
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WHICH COULD INFLUENCE NEGITIVELY OTHERS.FROM MY POINT OF VIEW
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PEOPLE SPEND THEIR MOST OF THEIR FREE
TIME
 STAYING HOME AND DOING OTHER ACTIVITIES. PEOPLE WHO SAY THAT TEENAGERS SPEND THEIR MOST OF THIER LEISURE
TIME
 IS DOING
SHOOPING
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WHICH FOR ME ITS NOT TRUEI BELIEVE THAT
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 TODAY THEY PRFER TO TY AT HOME BY DOING DIFFERENT ACTIVITIES.
FOR EXAMPLE
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PLAYING COMPUTER GAMES
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CHATTING WITH THIER FRIENDS AND MANY MORE.
THUS
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SHOPPING IS NOT THEIR HIGHLY
TIME
 PASSING ACTIVITY
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WHILE THEY USE THEIR FREE
TIME
 STAYING COMFORTABLY DOING OTHER ACTIVITIES WHICH ARE MORE ENJOYABLE.
HOWEVER
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I AGREE WITH PEOPLE THAT
SHOOPING
 COULD BE HAVE NEGATIVE EFFECTS ON OTHER SOCIETY MEMBERS
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ESPECIALLY ON YOUNSTERS.IT COULD WEAK THE RELATIONSHIP WITH OUR NEIGHBOUR
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IF WE TEND TO ALWAYS GO OUT FOR MARKETING AND IGNORE OUR SOCIETY MEMBERS. SO FOR
THIS
 REASON
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IT IS NOT THE GOOD WAY OF SPENDING FREE
TIME
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BUT IT DOES NOT MEAN THAT
THIS
 IS THE NLY ACTIVITY THAT CAN AKE SOME NEGATIVE IMPACTS ON SOCIETIES. SOME OF THEM ARE RELATED TO INDOOR ACTIVITIES
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WHICH I MENTIONED IN THE
LAST
 PARAGRAPH. I THINK THE WAY WE SPEND OUR LEISURE
TIME
 CAN INFLUENCE MORE THAN HOW WE SPEND OUR
TIME
. ALL IN ALL
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I TOTALLY DISAGREE THAT,
SHOOPING
 IS LARGELY USED BY YOUNG PEOPLE TO SPEND THEIR FREE
TIME
 BECAUSE HOME IS THE PLACE WHERE THEY PASS THEIR FREE
TIME
.MEANWHILE
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WHATEVERE WE DO OUTSIDE OR INSIDE COULD HAVE NEGATIVE EFFECTS ON YOUNGS
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WE CANNOT BLAME ONLY
SHOOPING
 FOR
THIS
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Submitted by manpreet15011998 on

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