Nowadays an ordinary person can become popular through the Internet and TV media. Is it a positive or a negative development? Give your opinion and relevant examples.

In
this
modern
world
, it is possible for a person to become well known through the television show or
online platform
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an online platform
online platforms
. I personally believe that there is a major negative of people become famous in the
world
, but there is still some benefit on
this
argument. To start off, there are a various of different online media
such
as
Youtube
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YouTube
, Instagram or Facebook which people can exploit the different method, for
instant
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an instant
, recording live video game, music cover or even some live talk. By using those
method
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methods
to increase more spectators or
view rate
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view, rate
and after that they will become much more famous and attract the advertisement.
For example
, a
youtuber
named PewDiePie who only started with a web-
mic
and cam, but
finally
become rich because he can earn the money by million of subscribers watching his video.
Secondly
, there are certain television
show namely
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show, namely
, American God Talent and so on. Many of potential people come and show off their skill to make an opportunity for themselves and become famous.
However
, in contrary, there
are
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is
extremely negative impact
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an extremely negative impact
if people being well known. Obviously, they have
a
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an
extremely strong influence over the real
world
especially on teenage.
Hence
, they have to be aware of their words and actions and will gain
more pressure
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more press
.
Moreover
, there
are
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is
more argument in nowadays internet between those popular
person
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people
persons
and haters and it can be spread so quickly in the cyberspace.
Besides
, some people are sensitive and impulse on what the other people mention on them.
Thus
, they might be hurt in the real
world
or even their relatives. In summary, I believe
that is
a great method to provide an opportunity to become
success
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successful
.
Nevertheless
,
it
it is
it's
also
a problem which will affect their livelihood during that time.
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  • ordinary person
  • popular
  • Internet
  • TV media
  • positive development
  • negative development
  • examples
  • showcase talents
  • creativity
  • opportunities
  • accessible
  • YouTube stars
  • reality TV participants
  • successful careers
  • democratization of fame
  • diverse backgrounds
  • greater representation
  • privacy
  • public scrutiny
  • mental health issues
  • anxiety
  • depression
  • controversial content
  • sensational content
  • attract attention
  • societal impacts
  • misinformation
  • harmful trends
  • short-lived fame
  • fleeting
  • instability
  • career
  • income
  • online sensations
  • popularity
  • influence
  • aspirations
  • self-esteem
  • younger audiences
  • developing skills
  • detrimental
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