Nowadays an ordinary person can become popular through the Internet and TV media. Is it a positive or a negative development? Give your opinion and relevant examples.
In
this
modern world
, it is possible for a person to become well known through the television show or online platform
. I personally believe that there is a major negative of people become famous in the Suggestion
an online platform
online platforms
world
, but there is still some benefit on this
argument.
To start off, there are a various of different online media such
as Youtube
, Instagram or Facebook which people can exploit the different method, for Suggestion
YouTube
instant
, recording live video game, music cover or even some live talk. By using those Suggestion
an instant
method
to increase more spectators or Suggestion
methods
view rate
and after that they will become much more famous and attract the advertisement. Accept comma addition
view, rate
For example
, a youtuber
named PewDiePie who only started with a web-mic
and cam, but finally
become rich because he can earn the money by million of subscribers watching his video. Secondly
, there are certain television show namely
, American God Talent and so on. Many of potential people come and show off their skill to make an opportunity for themselves and become famous.
Accept comma addition
show, namely
However
, in contrary, there are
Suggestion
is
extremely negative impact
if people being well known. Obviously, they have Suggestion
an extremely negative impact
a
extremely strong influence over the real Suggestion
an
world
especially on teenage. Hence
, they have to be aware of their words and actions and will gain more pressure
. Suggestion
more press
Moreover
, there are
more argument in nowadays internet between those popular Suggestion
is
person
and haters and it can be spread so quickly in the cyberspace. Suggestion
people
persons
Besides
, some people are sensitive and impulse on what the other people mention on them. Thus
, they might be hurt in the real world
or even their relatives.
In summary, I believe that is
a great method to provide an opportunity to become success
. Suggestion
successful
Nevertheless
, it
it is
it's
also
a problem which will affect their livelihood during that time.Submitted by wongyutunggg on
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