Children are less active in their free time than in the past. Therefore, sports lessons must be compulsory in schools. To what extend do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays minors are becoming less active than before at leisure
time
. Use synonyms
Therefore
, Linking Words
physical
classes have to be obligatory in schools. Even though attaching more importance to physical facilities are fairly expensive for government, Suggestion
physics
sport
plays a significant role in people’s life. I will debate both sides of the argument in Use synonyms
this
essay.
On the one hand, providing with better physical facilities Linking Words
are
luxurious for government. If physical lessons are mandatory for school children, more educator of physical activities who have to be supplied with salary might work in schools which means Suggestion
is
extra expenditure
for the Suggestion
extra expenditures
an extra expenditure
authority
. Another expenditure of government will be constructing some contemporary sports complexes Use synonyms
such
as gym, pitch, swimming pools, cycle track. Linking Words
Furthermore
, alternative solution in order to avoid being less active at Linking Words
spare
Suggestion
the spare time
time
, minors may travel to short distance, Use synonyms
for instance
they may visit their relative’s so as to assist housework. Linking Words
However
, it will be more helpful to dedicate free Linking Words
time
for educational activity, since physical activity is considered as a waste of valuable study Use synonyms
time
. In my view, children might prefer to learn poems by heart or to deal with a crossword puzzle rather than playing football or swimming.
Use synonyms
On the other hand
, Linking Words
Use synonyms
sport
has a pivotal role in people’s life so as to build Suggestion
the sport
healthy lifestyle
. In fact, children’s health depends on their physical activities which are done at leisure or study Suggestion
a healthy lifestyle
healthy lifestyles
time
. Having and maintaining Use synonyms
healthy way
of life Suggestion
a healthy way
are
beneficial for both minors and Suggestion
is
authority
. Because, if people are healthy, Use synonyms
authority
does not have to spend much money on medical care for the population. Use synonyms
Moreover
, Linking Words
sport
is another factor for minors to be well-being. In my opinion, many school children suffer Use synonyms
from sitting one
place without Suggestion
from sitting in one
movement
during classes that may affect their mental development as well. Suggestion
moving
Thus
, physical lessons may be enforced in order to cause children’s mental well-being. Linking Words
Linking Words
Additionally
Accept comma addition
Additionally, sport
sport
gives an opportunity for school children to learn how to follow discipline and work with others as a team.
Use synonyms
Therefore
, it will rational to conclude that physical classes should be strengthened to make minors Linking Words
more physical
active now, albeit some expenditure which may be spent by the Suggestion
more physically
authority
. Since Use synonyms
sport
is regarded as a significant activity to have Use synonyms
health and satisfied lifestyle
.Suggestion
a health and satisfied lifestyle
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