Children are less active in their free time than in the past. Therefore, sports lessons must be compulsory in schools. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays minors are becoming less active than before at leisure

time

.

Therefore

,

physical

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physics

classes have to be obligatory in schools. Even though attaching more importance to physical facilities are fairly expensive for government,

sport

plays a significant role in people’s life. I will debate both sides of the argument in

this

essay. On the one hand, providing with better physical facilities

are

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is

luxurious for government. If physical lessons are mandatory for school children, more educator of physical activities who have to be supplied with salary might work in schools which means

extra expenditure

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extra expenditures

an extra expenditure

for the

authority

. Another expenditure of government will be constructing some contemporary sports complexes

such

as gym, pitch, swimming pools, cycle track.

Furthermore

, alternative solution in order to avoid being less active at

spare

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the spare time

time

, minors may travel to short distance,

for instance

they may visit their relative’s so as to assist housework.

However

, it will be more helpful to dedicate free

time

for educational activity, since physical activity is considered as a waste of valuable study

time

. In my view, children might prefer to learn poems by heart or to deal with a crossword puzzle rather than playing football or swimming.

On the other hand

,

sport

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the sport

has a pivotal role in people’s life so as to build

healthy lifestyle

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a healthy lifestyle

healthy lifestyles

. In fact, children’s health depends on their physical activities which are done at leisure or study

time

. Having and maintaining

healthy way

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a healthy way

of life

are

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is

beneficial for both minors and

authority

. Because, if people are healthy,

authority

does not have to spend much money on medical care for the population.

Moreover

,

sport

is another factor for minors to be well-being. In my opinion, many school children suffer

from sitting one

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from sitting in one

place without

movement

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moving

during classes that may affect their mental development as well.

Thus

, physical lessons may be enforced in order to cause children’s mental well-being.

Additionally

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Additionally, sport

sport

gives an opportunity for school children to learn how to follow discipline and work with others as a team.

Therefore

, it will rational to conclude that physical classes should be strengthened to make minors

more physical

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more physically

active now, albeit some expenditure which may be spent by the

authority

. Since

sport

is regarded as a significant activity to have

health and satisfied lifestyle

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a health and satisfied lifestyle

.