Some people think that the government should put a tax on unhealthy food to encourage people to eat more healthily. Do you agree or disagree?

The recent increase in incidences of obesity and diabetes

are usually attributed

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is usually attributed

to the increased

consumption

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of high calorific foods. Some believe that by imposing taxes on sales of these items will discourage their

consumption

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and will eventually motivate people to make healthier choices. I tend to agree with

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passage will provide some supportive points for my opinion. The main reason for the increased

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of these unwholesome foods is their easy availability and affordable costs. In

modern world

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the modern world

, when everyone is pressurized with their work schedule, fast foods like burger and pizza are really easy to procure and takes less time to consume.

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, their regular and frequent

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is associated with higher risk for the development of chronic disorders. Not only

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affect

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affects

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wellbeing, but

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leads to increased emotional strain as sometimes these individuals are subjected to bullying from their peer at

workplace

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a workplace

the workplace

that negatively impact their self-confidence.

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, unhealthy population

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put financial strains on countries. Governments are required to invest a huge chunk of their budget towards

development

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the development

and maintenance of healthcare sector in

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the form

of medical colleges, hospitals and pharmaceuticals. One possible solution to deter people from buying these fat and sugar loaded foods is proposed to be application of

higher tax

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higher taxes

a higher tax

on establishments involved in production of these commodities.

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will not only increase the cost of these

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products, but

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provide revenue to states.

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,

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additional income can

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be utilized for subsidizing healthier foods like vegetables and fruits to promote healthy eating habits among consumers.

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model has proven to be successful across many countries.

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, the recent imposition of

higher tax

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higher taxes

a higher tax

on cigarettes and energy drinks across UAE was found to be associated with their decreased

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. In conclusion, increased

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of high calorific food is

main reason

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the main reason

for higher prevalence of metabolic disorders among global population that creates

additional economic burden

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an additional economic burden

globally. In my opinion, imposing extra taxes on sales of these foods is one of the best and intelligent choice for controlling

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menace.