~2020-01-07: Task 1 You ride a bicycle to work, but there is a problem with the parking. Write a letter to the building manger to provide bicycle parking. In your letter, you should: • why you ride a bicycle to work • what the problem is with the parking • what your suggest are.

#bicycle #work #manger

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

this

letter with regard to the unavailability of a parking area for bicycles near the building premises. I am

resident

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a resident

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this

building, and my apartment number is A-27. Recently, I have instigated to travel to my office through cycles as it more

effiecient

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efficient

and convenient for me.

Moreover

, it is

also

beneficial for my physical health.

However

, it has come to my attention that there is no parking stand for bicycles in the entire building.

Furthermore

, many owners who

phave

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have

bicylce

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bicycle

, either park it on the footpath or

besides

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beside

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any other vehicles.

Additionally

, due to lack of

safety

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,safety

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many complain of theft and damage. I would kindly request you provide a space for parking cycles. If I may, it would be profoundly

thoughtfull

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thoughtful

if the space

besides

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beside

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the main gate of the building can be utilized for installing a bicycle stand. I hope you could understand the situation and take

actions

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action

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favourably. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours truly,

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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7Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
9Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

172 words

4.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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~2020-01-07: Task 1 You ride a bicycle to work, but there is a problem with the parking. Write a letter to the building manger to provide bicycle parking. In your letter, you should: • why you ride a bicycle to work • what the problem is with the parking • what your suggest are.

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