The maps below show the changes in New York city from 1990 to 2005
The pictures below demonstrate how New York
city
has been introduced and changed over the period of 15 years till 2005.
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City
Overall
, in 1990 the town was a much greener residential area with a large number of trees and industrial houses, however
, during the 15 years
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,years
city
experienced a number of dramatic changes.
Looking first at the right side
of the
New York Correct article usage
apply
city
, the Change the capitalization
City
amount
of changes Change the quantifier
number
occurred
. Correct pronoun usage
that occurred
For example
, the trees were chopped down to make factory
, Fix the agreement mistake
factories
airport
and small houses around the east area. Fix the agreement mistake
airports
However
, parking and railway stations in the south-eastern side
also
hospital
and Fix the agreement mistake
hospitals
school
in the north-eastern Fix the agreement mistake
schools
side
were not changed from 1990 to 2005.
Another interesting change is that, reconstructing left
Correct article usage
the left
side
of the city
with supplemented modern Supermarket
. New York faced Fix the agreement mistake
Supermarkets
with
witness changes Change preposition
apply
according to
destroyed many tresses and industrial houses instead
of modern buildings. In addition
, new
stretch of railway was built running directly south.Add an article
a new
the new
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