In today’s competitive world, many families find it necessary for both parents to go out to work. While some say the children in these families benefit from the additional income, others feel they lack support because of their parents’ absence. Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays, many families have to balance the need for additional income with the necessity of providing a secure, comforting environment for their children. I believe that the latter is more important.

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to raise a child, often the only option in today’s tough economic climate is for both parents to work, either in a part-time or full-time capacity. Not only does

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provide money for the day-to-day

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essentials, but it

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allows the family to live in a neighbourhood where the best schools are situated. The result of

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is that a solution has to be found for when children finish

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before their parents arrive home. After-

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clubs are plentiful; other options include family members looking after the children either voluntarily or on a paid basis, often at a reduced rate. A pupil at primary

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needs the comforting reassurance of somebody at home or at the

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gate when he or she finishes the

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day. Whether it is to tell that person about a good mark for homework or to discuss any problems, the mere presence of another human being provides invaluable support. So-called latchkey youngsters often mix with others in the same position and

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can lead to undesirable consequences

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as involvement in crime, drugs or alcohol. Help with homework as well as providing food and drink are other advantages. In conclusion,

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extra income is always welcome, I believe that the positive aspects of the support of one or more parents far outweigh any monetary gain.