Many feel that today’s increasing demand for oil and gas must prompt scientists to look for new, future energy sources. Others feel we should not search for new energy sources because searching causes too much damage to the environment. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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Fossil fuels and gases have

became

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become

essential for every

sectors

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sector

. With its raising ask, some people are suggesting to find new energy sources to

fullfil

put in effect

fulfil

fututre

the time yet to come

future

needs, while other people believe that these findings cause damage to the environment and

therefore

we should not look for new energy sources.

This

essay will discuss both views and state that later option is more effective.

To begin

with, it is

quit

to a degree (not used with a negative)

quite

understable

that current fossil fuels are limited and it takes many years for its

composion

a concluding action

completion

under the earth

crest

the outer layer of the Earth

crust

Therefore to

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Therefore, to

waste money

exporing

inquire into

exploring

for new sources is far

to a degree exceeding normal or proper limits

too

draconian.

Instead

of that,

government

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the government

could invest

this

fund in inventing new energies that are natural and renewable like solar

Accept space

wind and hydro. These energies are limitless and can be used for many centuries without any scarcity.

Secondly

, these

exploration

Suggestion

explorations

of new source cause damage to the inhabitance of near by area. Activities related to the refining of these fuels and gases generate tons of polluting gases into

environment

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the environment

. On the other end, natural energies are

enviroment

the totality of surrounding conditions

environment

friendly and it does not create any kind of pollution. These kind of energies can be

prodce

bring forth or yield

produced

produce

far from the localities and will not affect human lives.

There fore scientists

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Therefore, scientists

Therefore scientists

should look for

new form

Suggestion

new forms

a new form

of energies. In the conclusion, according to me investing resources in finding new energy sources is not justifiable because of its limited

availablity

the quality of being at hand when needed

availability

and polluting effects, government and scientists should invest their money and time in exploration of new

renwable

that can be renewed or extended

renewable

and natural energies which are cheap and pollution free.

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