The maps below show the changes that have taken place at Queen Mary Hospital since its construction in 1960. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

IELTS Writing Task Chart for The maps below show the changes that have taken place at Queen Mary Hospital since its construction in 1960. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The maps show

development

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the development

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of Queen Mary Hospital over

the

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apply

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three different times 1960, 1980 and 2000-years.

Overall

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, in 1960-year on the east side of the

of the

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road

they

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were

hospital

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a hospital

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and car park,

shopping

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a shopping

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centre

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together with

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farmland

were

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situated on the west side of the main road.

Likewise

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from 1980-year locations of

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this

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these

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places were changed

as well as

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detached, added.

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shopping

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the shopping

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centre

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has

removed

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been removed

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along

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alone

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with

instead

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this

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it has opened Cancer

Centre

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Nonetheless

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farmland has detached and constructed the Nursing School.

Consequently

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apply

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2000-year Cancer

Centre

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has

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apply

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extended to

east

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the east

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side.

As a consequence

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, Nursing School was smaller than pharmacy and clinic. In spite of them, pharmacy, hospital and car park have kept their positions.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.

Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.

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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words centre with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "show" in your introduction.

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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
15
Grammar mistakes
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

124 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

infrastructural evolution
healthcare facilities
technological advancements
capacity expansion
modernization efforts
historical layout
landscape adaptation
access routes
renovation and improvement
initial structure
environmental considerations

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The maps below show the changes that have taken place at Queen Mary Hospital since its construction in 1960. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The most important aim of science shold be to improve people's lives.

Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and poluttion problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree? What other measures fdo you think might be effective?

Some people think it is a good idea to socialise with work colleagues during evenings and weekends. Other people think it is important to keep working life completely separate from social life. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

The average standard of people's health is likely to be lower in the future than it is now. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

There are many people today who are overweight and unhealthy. Give reasons for this and give possible solutions to fix these problems.