The charts below show the main reasons for study among students of different age groups and the amount of support they received from employers.
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for their career
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reasons in late adulthood.
Conversely
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shows that study
stemming from interest
increases
with age. There are only 10% of under 26yr olds
studying out of interest
. The percentage increases
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dramatically in late adulthood. Nearly
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70% of over 49yr olds
study
for interest
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reasons in that age group.
The second
graph shows that employer support is maximum (approximately 60%) for the under 26yr students. It drops rapidly to 32% up to the third
decade of life,
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then
increases
in late adulthood up to about 44%. It is unclear whether employer support is only for career
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