The charts below show the main reasons for study among students of different age groups and the amount of support they received from employers.

The charts below show the main reasons for study among students of different age groups and the amount of support they received from employers.
The first graph shows that there is a gradual decrease in
study
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the study
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for
career
reasons with age. Nearly 80% of students under 26 years,
study
for their
career
.
This
percentage gradually declines by 10-20% every decade. Only 40% of 40-49yr
olds
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and 18% of over 49yr
olds
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old
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studying
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study
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for
career
reasons in late adulthood.
Conversely
, the first graph
also
shows that
study
stemming from
interest
increases
with age. There are only 10% of under 26yr
olds
studying out of
interest
. The percentage
increases
slowly till the beginning of the fourth decade
,
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and
increases
dramatically in late adulthood.
Nearly
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same
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number of 40-49yr
olds
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old
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study
for
career
and
interest
.
However
70% of over 49yr
olds
study
for
interest
in comparison to 18% studying for
career
reasons in that age group. The
second
graph shows that employer support is maximum (approximately 60%) for the under 26yr students. It drops rapidly to 32% up to the
third
decade of life
,
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and
then
increases
in late adulthood up to about 44%. It is unclear whether employer support is only for
career
-focused
study
, but the highest level is for those students who mainly
study
for
career
purposes
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Vocabulary: Replace the words study, career, yr, olds, interest, increases with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increases" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "gradual" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Lifelong learning
  • Professional development
  • Adult education
  • Career advancement
  • Personal enrichment
  • Academic pursuits
  • Upskilling
  • Reskilling
  • Educational attainment
  • Tuition reimbursement
  • Flexible work arrangements
  • Work-study balance
  • Financial assistance
  • Professional growth
  • Study leave
  • Employee retention
  • Workforce development
  • Time management
  • Self-improvement
  • Motivational factors
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