The chart below shows the results of a survey of people who visited four types of tourist attraction in Britain in 1999.
The chart illustrates the number of
visitors
who visited four different types of popular attraction
places like theme parks, Museums, Galleries, Historic Houses and Monuments, and Wildlife Fix the agreement mistake
attractions
park
and Zoos in Britain in 1999.
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parks
Overall
, visitors
were mostly attracted to the Theme parks likewise
, museums where
their Correct your spelling
were
second
-best destination to visit. Meanwhile, historic houses and monuments, and wildlife were visited by few
.
Correct article usage
a few
To begin
with, the theme park was the most attracted
designation where people experienced five different things, including the Blackpool pleasure beach Replace the word
attractive
where
47% of people were spotted visiting, Correct word choice
which
however
, adventures and Legoland, Windsor, have the same number of visitors
(10% each) which was lower than the Pleasure land, Southport Chessington World of Adventures and Alton towers which were 16% and 17% respectively.
Secondly
, more than one-third
(37%) percentage of people visited the
Museums and Galleries Correct article usage
apply
whereas
Wildlife park
and Zoos had fewer Fix the agreement mistake
parks
visitors
to
9%. Historic Houses and monuments were popular places to explore, Change preposition
than
although
, few visited them to
16%.Change preposition
apply
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