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Some people think that tennage years are the happiest part of the people's lives.others believe that adultery is better ..discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Some echelons of the society deem that the mere income plays the significant role while opting a
job whereas
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job, whereas
 I consider that the other
factors including
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factors, including
job
 satisfaction and
work place
a place where work is done
workplace
 ambience are equally crucial for the
job
 seekers.
To begin
 with, there is not even a shadow of doubt that capital is needed to complete the fundamental needs
(
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food, shelter and cloth) of
human
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humans
the human
.Nowadays, living cost
is souring
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has soured
 year by year, even
one
 need
money
 to breathe. To explain, people need coins to pay bills, children's fees
,
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,
to communicate and to maintain good health.That's why
money
 is pivotal to survive and
one
 need to think about a good salary
job whereas
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job, whereas
 other factors
are
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are also playing
have also played
also
 play the parallel role with
money
.
Furthermore
, along with
money
,
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,
job
contentment
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Contentment
 is
also
 the
salience
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salient
 feature for
that
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That's
That
 the
job
 seekers need to consider.If the employee does not get his
dersired
greatly desired
desired
job
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job, then
then
 he will fail to channelise
one
's potential in the right direction which implicit a heavy toll on
one
's profession as well as
on
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in
 social life and owing to
this
 the candidate might get depressed.To add to
this
, to think about
work place environment
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the work place environment
workplace environment
 is
also
 important prior to picking a
job
. To elaborate, cooperative
work
 staff and the recognition from the employer are
also
 the crucial features to stimulate the confidence and to rejuvenate from
work
 pressure. In conclusion, with aforementioned statements
,
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,
 it is apparent that the
job
 satisfaction and
work
 environment
is
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are
 equally important together with the handsome salary.

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