You and your family are living in rented accommodation in an English speaking country. You are not satisfied with the condition of some of the furniture. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter introduce yourself explain what is wrong with the furniture say what action you would like the landlord to take
Dear
Mrs.
Keys,
I am Yağmur Alataş. I am living on Bahçeşehir street number 2. Change the punctuation
Mrs
Firstly
, I want to state that I am so happy to find my dream house in London. However
, as you know we have rented your home
one month before, but I want to inform you about the situation that we came across. Maybe you remember when we checked the home
before renting we realized that there were two of the chairs were broken. Besides
, other chairs were musty which was looking like
dirty.
Change preposition
apply
Next
week my family will be here to see me for a long time. As we talked if it is possible can you come home
and maybe we would talk about what we can do to solve this
problem? I don't want to criticize you just want to make you remember that. I am at home
till six o'clock on weekdays. I am hoping to hear good news from you. Thank you for now.
Yours faithfully.
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Structure your letter
A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:
- A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
- The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
- A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)
When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.
All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.